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Thanks Eva. I really didn't really think about it that way. My day Has Brightened

Okay, thanks everyone, but this piece wasn't really going to go any where from the start. It was just a quickie, you know?

Wow! That was a really cool twist to red riding hood. Holy crap. I can still feel the wolf's kiss. (I was thinkng of some one else!) The description was ...

Wow. Just... Wow. You've out done yourself once again. Awesome work, dude!

Ok, wow. This is just as excellent as Wrong or Right. Keep it up.

*exasperated sigh* I've told people already, that when I take the three steps ahead out, it doesn't work!

Wow. Although sometimes the use of too many unanswered questions is bad, you pulled it off. The flow was kinda iffy, but it worked all the same. Loved it.

ok, thanks. I will sooo change that.

ohh. i thought i did, but oh well.

What do you mean that I should bring something even newer to it?

That was great! I loved how harry umm....what should I say..... ended up wanting Hermione?! It made me laugh...... a lot! great job, once again.

I think that this was actualy quite good. I don't care what everyone else says, i think this will make an excellent story. keep it up and keep ME posted!

Very good story line. I think it was as excellent as the other ones that you have posted. This was a great chapter!

I liked how you gave the reader different choices. Very unique. The imaginary was good, and best of all, you fit the rhyming in perfectly. All in all, lovely, funny, ...

Thanks. I kind of changed it a bit, so thanks for your advice.